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Post by Rogue on Jun 6, 2005 23:17:51 GMT -5
A poem about whats going on right now with Rogue gone evil and Doc wanting to get her back. www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1933082~*~ Listen to me Listen to the words I say You can call to me But I wont respond Gone is my soul Gone is the person who loved you You can try to find her But she is gone forever Leave it to me Leave it to me to take your heart and break it I know you wont resist No matter what your mind tells you Come to me Come to me in the night I know your hearts still beats for me I know you still care You still care You still care with all your heart Your heart so strong You care so much You give up your control You give up who you are All to get me back All to save my soul You do it all You do it all to take me back You forgive the pain I caused you You accept me back You saved me You saved my soul I grieve for the pain I caused you But you tell me it's okay It's all alright It's all alright you say Over and over again Through my weakened voice All I did, was hold you close All I did, was never let you go Never wanting to let go Never wanting to leave you Having had enough of the lonliness Having had given in to your holiness Wrapped in your arms Holding you close Close to my heart Close to my soul Holding you close to me Never wanting to let go
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Post by Doc on Jun 7, 2005 4:25:09 GMT -5
Man, that was...un-be-frickin'-lievable. If i didn't know better...
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Post by Rogue on Jun 7, 2005 6:37:07 GMT -5
So I take it you like it?
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Post by Doc on Jun 8, 2005 19:29:15 GMT -5
Duh, YES! Man, you are good. If only i was good at writing music for you're words.
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Post by Rogue on Jun 8, 2005 21:50:03 GMT -5
If you like it so much it'd be interesting to see what you think of a piece I actually worked hard on. *sweatdrop* This one only took ten minutes. An I'm not that good really. No where near as good as Poe. If I ever could get that good I'd die happy.
Anyways, it'd be awsome if you were good at writting music. It'd be awsome to hear them together.
PS: If you haven't guessed Poe is one of my poetic ideals. His work is amazing.
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Post by Doc on Jun 9, 2005 23:36:17 GMT -5
Really? I couldn't tell. Ugh, I'm hopeless at music. Sometimes I'll get a tune, usually when I'm trying to remember something else, but don't ask me to write it down. Or play it.
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Post by Rogue on Jun 9, 2005 23:37:58 GMT -5
I always write anything down when I can. Well I try at least.
Anyways as soon as I finish another poem I'll put it up. I've been working on it for an hour so it should be pretty good.
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Post by Doc on Jun 9, 2005 23:39:24 GMT -5
Can't wait to see it. I would write it down. But, like I said, I'm hopeless at music. I wouldn't know what notes they were.
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Post by Rogue on Jun 9, 2005 23:42:07 GMT -5
*shrugs* I can't play any instraments but I can carry a tune. Or at least thats whats my friends say. *shrugs* What can ya do.
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Post by Doc on Jun 9, 2005 23:55:21 GMT -5
Dad claims I can sing. I don't believe him. Carry a tune...yeah, and a beat.
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Post by Rogue on Jun 9, 2005 23:58:34 GMT -5
Though singing is fun and it helps me write. *nods*
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Post by Doc on Jun 10, 2005 1:32:12 GMT -5
Yeah, is fun. Doesn't necessarily mean I can do it. ;D
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Post by Rogue on Jun 10, 2005 1:39:06 GMT -5
Can't you do them both at the same time?
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Post by Doc on Jun 10, 2005 1:43:04 GMT -5
No, I mean sing. At all. Period. My voice sux.
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Post by Rogue on Jun 10, 2005 1:46:58 GMT -5
Oh. Well I kow lots of people who can't. My sister for one. She thinks she can when she sounds like my cat if she was dieing. >_<
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